Monday, November 13, 2017

A Leaf (Haiku) Comments

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Mihaela Pirjol
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Seamus O Brian 20 December 2017

I love the concept of ''new journey''. We tend to think of death as the end of the journey, not the beginning of a new one. Yet, in nature, death is never wasted. It becomes part of a new journey, ''on the rivulet'' of life. Brilliantly capture here in this profound haiku. Bravo, good poet!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2017

In autumn leaves from trees fall on ground and on the water of rivulet and then these leaves start their journey. This theme has been nicely inscribed by you dear Pirjol in a concise poem. Thanks for sharing.

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