Monday, August 24, 2020

A Lazy Poem Zzzzzzzzzzzzz Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slow, snow, go, well it rhymes at least.
a rest of a least twenty minutes is now required.
too much to write.
is everybody's a two minute wonder I wonder
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Paul Brookes
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bri edwards 24 February 2021

In a circuitous way i'm able to send you my hello and best wishes. PH still is suffering from near-death! bri

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Terry Craddock 02 November 2020

Glass Breaks In Cobweb Finger Lures glass breaks in cobweb fracture splinters so beautiful like a spiders spun web circle delicate lines fractures eruption lace surface safe until unless careless cuts fingers on splinters Inspired by the poem 'A Lazy Poem Zzzzzzzzzzzzz' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 02 November 2020

High Cloud Delicate Snowflake Factories water rain high cloud thin freezes into ghost delicate wafer vein leaf petals snowflakes snowflakes softly falls Inspired by the poem 'A Lazy Poem Zzzzzzzzzzzzz' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 02 November 2020

Sight Flutters Like Snowflakes Falling a slow pulse flutter sight like snowflakes falling flutter flutter flutter slowly to surface patient ground snowflakes flutter light shutters silent veils world Inspired by the poem 'A Lazy Poem Zzzzzzzzzzzzz' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 02 November 2020

Snowflake Instant Melts Or Snow Accumulates a slow flight like soft snowflakes falling flutter flutter flutter slowly to the ground snowflakes flutter make it or melt instantly Inspired by the poem 'A Lazy Poem Zzzzzzzzzzzzz' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 02 November 2020

A Slow Snowflake Poem a slow slow poem like snowflakes falling flutter flutter flutter slowly to the ground will snowflakes flutter make it or melt instantly Inspired by the poem 'A Lazy Poem Zzzzzzzzzzzzz' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 26 October 2020

glass breaks in cobweb fracture splinters, so beautiful like a spiders web circle delicate lines or fractures, safe until unless careless cuts fingers on splinters

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Terry Craddock 26 October 2020

a slow poem like snowflakes falling, flutter flutter flutter slowly to the ground, will snowflakes flutter make it or melt instantly

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Bri Edwards 06 September 2020

a chuckle (by me) at the ending was welcome. i almost fell asleep. bri :) amusing and i suspect truth here

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Kostas Lagos 24 August 2020

A titanic effort in my opinion! Amusing!

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Spock The Vegan 24 August 2020

I'm too lazy to respond.: -)

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Denis Mair 24 August 2020

It's terrible how our thoughts work against each other to create a logjam of words. At certain moments those same thoughts once wove themselves together into a musical reverie, but at the moment of composition they fail us. Blocked poets suffer a singular form of self-torture.

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