A Lazy Afternoon. Comments

Swing, swing, Listening to the crickets, Nothing much to do, Paradise around me, Now all I need is you. Swing, swing, - - - - - - - - - - - - . beautifully in tune with the lazy swing of the hammock

beautiful poem madam.. just more than loved it.. brilliant imagery.. and just loved the refrain, 'swing, swing' 10+++ certainly warm regards prashant

Paradise around me, Now all I need is you.................... love respires by blue of soul yet luscious glow reels off to flow, ingenious write by imagery, soft and mellow,10++, thanks for sharing