Wednesday, January 9, 2008

A Late Night Happy Write Comments

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What would we Be?
Will you ever let me See?
You let me know Things
Things that are like Rings
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John Nanashi Trowa Barton
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Your poem reads like the dance between two people who want to be closer, but don't yet know how to engage. It shows moments of joy, it renders moments of hesitation.

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