Monday, June 17, 2013

A Last Note Comments

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There is hole inside
Loneliness in my life
Cigarettes in one hand
Beer in the another...
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April Hammel
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Crayon Poet 18 September 2018

Guns and depression make a perilous formula - glad you're still here as a survivor, years later.

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Musawir Raakh 18 September 2018

REWRITE IT IN RHYMES DEAR, IT WILL SOUND MUCH BETTER, IT WOULD SOUND BETTER IN TURKISH THOUGH, GOOD WORK, KEEP IT UP

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April Hammel 18 September 2018

Thank you. I have been meaning to rewrite it for some time. There are some mistakes in grammer too.

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Vipins Puthooran 09 July 2013

rise up from the land of despair/ a poignant poem! ! !

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April Hammel 17 June 2013

Thank you very much Kelly...

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Kelly Seale 17 June 2013

Wow April... This is very deep and heartfelt... One's loneliness in a moment of desperation. This piece touched me greatly. Outstanding Write.: '(Kelly.

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