There is hole inside
Loneliness in my life
Cigarettes in one hand
Beer in the another...
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REWRITE IT IN RHYMES DEAR, IT WILL SOUND MUCH BETTER, IT WOULD SOUND BETTER IN TURKISH THOUGH, GOOD WORK, KEEP IT UP
Thank you. I have been meaning to rewrite it for some time. There are some mistakes in grammer too.
Wow April... This is very deep and heartfelt... One's loneliness in a moment of desperation. This piece touched me greatly. Outstanding Write.: '(Kelly.
Guns and depression make a perilous formula - glad you're still here as a survivor, years later.