Sunday, April 22, 2012

A Last Good Bye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Eyes are focused, somewhere else,
Ears no longer hear your words.
Mind tuned in to distant bells,
Or perhaps sweet singing of birds.
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Juan Olivarez
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Cigeng Zhang 29 September 2016

A last goodbye was a sad moment. Your poem was touching and beautiful.

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Constance K Yost 15 June 2012

Thank you, Juan for such a tender gentle telling of the way it often is. Constance Yost

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Wendy Thopliss 28 April 2012

Beautiful poem Juan, it brought tears to my eyes. Great write. Keep writing them my friend.

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Valerie Dohren 24 April 2012

At times, such imaginings are a welcome respite. Excellent work.

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Eric Cockrell 22 April 2012

walking thru the veil... to freedom! great poem.

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