Sunday, January 7, 2018
A Last Gasp Comments
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Into the ocean I wade
Final decision made
Steadily growing deeper
Soon to be my final keeper
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Bri Edwards
07 January 2018
it's cool embrace ...........its :) nice rhyming. i especially enjoyed the last 2 lines: My troubles, I'll never miss As I embrace the ocean's fatal kiss.................. bri ;)
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7/27/2025 1:48:20 PM # 1.0.0
A beautifully crafted write. Great rhyme with each line well executed.10