Wednesday, May 6, 2009

**a Lark Comments

Rating: 3.0

I had the beauty of the moon beside me
The lark stayed a while for me to touch
Her dark blue feathers had dust of stars
I did not know her she did
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Bonnie Collins 31 July 2009

What a beautifull write penned with so much imagery and an enjoyable flow....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

A fantastic poem with pleasant imagery. A great job is done,10+++

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Saadat Tahir 13 May 2009

The sultry afternoon shall bring the lament Like drops of rain the joy of grief in love so very ardent and touching...intense very nice write S_K its a tenner cheers

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Akram Saqib 12 May 2009

after reading this poem i feel that nature itself is speaking.the poet is only the mouthpiece.

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Rani Turton 11 May 2009

Wow! Sadiq, I don't know if writing can get better than this!

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Reshma Ramesh 10 May 2009

wow! ! the master at work again....................

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Kesav Easwaran 09 May 2009

A musical love poem right from heart...that's real Sadiq...the Sadiq i had been reading for pretty long time...10

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Antonio Liao 07 May 2009

how lucky you got that experiences of life...only few are choosen to such feeling....how i wish to have one....wonderful indeed..God bless and thank you my friend...a 10++++++++++

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Naidz Ladia 07 May 2009

a lark represented the lady queen of you heart...very nice composition dear sadiq..naizz

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Sandra Martyres 06 May 2009

A very beautiful poem with excellent imagery 10++

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