A Larger Identity Comments

We better come together as one.

I could collect precious substance from last four lines of this wonderful poem! A poem of great value and substance!

Our individuality is just one layer, and our identity is just like a small brick. Bit truly we have a greater cosmic identity a s souls, the children of God. Our true identity is with universal existence. This is an interesting poem very beautifully and excellently penned...10

A very interesting poem Savita enjoyed thank you Alan

A segregated individual starts to Suffer from malice of loneliness Holding an insecure place In a large body of universal existence. -A great poem

A good poem that chall see ngesiSwat us to go global in how we see ourselves. So true. We confine ourselves to the now.

Yes, human beings are one.Only that one section should not subdue the other. Struggle should be against this, not that you are English and we am Indians.A good message.

WOW! this must be your thesis for a doctorate in philosophy or somethin'. no offense meant! it does ring a bell deep in my soul. i get the loneliness part. if it weren't for loneliness, i would probably not have married 4 times and i would perhaps not do volunteer work! i like it, ..............though you could make it funnier! bri :) to MyPoemList. i need a 'smart' poem there today!

Really your poem carry very important message. So, I love this poem. I can This poem is best one. I love to read it. Excellent creativity! Take my heartiest love. Be evergreen.

MALICE OF LONELINESS is a powerful phrase to identify the life we DON'T want to live, and acquiring the LARGER IDENTITY your title points to is the way to prevent such a dead-end existence. I just read/commented on A POET'S HEART and this poem expands the themes in that one. Poets have a gift of creativity: your poem summons them to use that gift in a responsible and productive way. And by sending this message, your poem illustrates the very goal it sets. Your poem encourages its readers to be better people; it literally gives them that degree of courage!

I really like the message that this poem carry; a poem that calls out for Unity and Humanity, All One, Globally... Only that we will put an end to Misery! Great poem!

Beautiful poem. Very true said, We are part of a bigger world And wish to be part of that larger identity... By engaging in some social activity and thereby doing service to others, we will be a part of larger identity and will not suffer from any loneliness..... Thoughtful message with great meaning. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

We are part of a bigger world And wish to be part of that larger identity. A great message.

Yes, in a large body of universal existence, when one withdraws into his narrow self, he makes himself an exile and will suffer from a sense of morbid loneliness! Only by accepting a wider identity and immersing in some social activities can a man gravitate away from his narrow self! Great write! So true!

A very well exposure of a community feeling, To ensure the peace in life we have to live in a larger global family. I have to endear all so that I also will be dear to them.

You provided the societal context for perception of life. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

universal existence, I like it, thanks. good one Savita.