A Laptop Universe Comments

As per the number of comments... A great poem of this technological age... Superb... Colin J...

Your words always so brilliant and deeply empowering. Technology is truly nothing without the interaction of people's creative minds and involvement.

technology in whatever form is nothing without the man behind it...the technological connectivity we have now is just great...the people haven't become true enough to really connect

The drudgery, the dependency on the almighty tech. True we do personalise the inanimate and for some it is their only company. Sadness and truth resonates; rhyme or no..I like it and think it is well penned.

Funny and thought provoking. I saw myself in it. I loved it, thank you, i will read more. :)

Very well you took control of rhyming what isn't quite simple. Brilliantly you are also writing and I like it. Greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt

Amusing poem - I like the double take. Mark

Lol, I would have never thought to write about my computer! ! I love your poems and ideas. Good job.

Poetry at its best..Wow..i stand in awe of you..and this is a REAL, REAL POET..not bragging, not rude, but just doing his best and share his talent with us.A wonderful write. Hugs, meggie

very good poem. Laptops are very important to most people who posess them. i know i love mine. my friends love theirs, and we would feel completely disconnected without them. laptops, internet. very very good poem. Cyrena

Great poem of emotions sad and unclothed. If i could have rated it, it would receive a ten. God bless poets all-MJG.

Rich in rhythim and commendable in content. Keep up the good works

Greenwolfe - My laptop universe has a green wolfe, who has escaped into cyberspace, never to return. blessings - Cheryl

Lorraine was right, I can learn a lot from someone like you, Awesome! 10+

Wow I love the concept of this poem. a startling message delivered so rhythmically...good job! =)

I just love your style of writing and the expressions you use most vividly. Keep writing.....good luck, arya

Excellent poem, amazing concept.A 10.

a word and a phrase for you! 'effortess' & 'what a concept! ' cheers...

Ah, fame, Ah popularity! Since you have discontinued then you do not need my comment but- 'You are old Father William, the young man said' etc. Cheers, Margery R..

Wow. You are a very good poet. I'm only a beginner, but I have to say your as good as any professional poet out there. Also thanks for such good comments on my poems 'Man at the Door' and 'Roadkill.' I thank you so much for being my first critic on my poems.