Monday, May 1, 2017

A Lap Around The Field Comments

Rating: 4.0

I ran solo today
Under a mould-like sky
In greyish stale,
No running to catch
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douglas lewis
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Jazib Kamalvi 02 May 2017

A thoughtful start during running. Thanks

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Rod Mendieta 02 May 2017

Quite original as far as... well, everything: subject matter, wording, imagery, though it suggested to me quite an accomplished state of zen-jogging stripped down to the very core where only the 'arms pumping like a faulty windmill' remain.

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