Friday, April 30, 2010

A Lantern Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

A bright lantern kiss between you and I,
It is soft as the breeze and big as the sky.
Bright is the moment in our little place.
We touch our hearts, by joining our face.
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Leslie Alexis
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Miss Molu 13 January 2013

You're the fuel of my fire-your love I trust. I will love you forever-even when I'm dust As always-I'm always thrown by your words.. Eclectic piece

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Hosny Soliman 06 October 2011

Well done.Really i can feel your words with its warmness.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 June 2010

‘Together we are, individuals gone’…where a kiss enters into eternity [you wrote] …fine diction Ms. Nivedita UK

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Matt Mooney 14 May 2010

What a lovely poem on the essence of a kiss betweem lovers.

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