A Landscape Is Awaiting... Comments

A beautiful poem. Very true said, about the harsh realities we are facing in society. We cannot expect a major change for landscape awaiting as number of trees are reducing and may be a jungle may too vanish away.

Disillusioned with society with all the horrors that can happen, but the sheer beauty of the lines that you express uplifts the content to a scale of breathtaking heights! !

The best lines of the poem...I felt is And we can hear a woman crying far.........These men haven't changed since their birth and also A hard mind we have to acquire.....Surely the things are going that way when hear and read the tragic and brutal incidents somewhere in villages where a poet cannot be a silent spectator of events against the humanity. Here the poet have shown his anger and emotions beautifully made into a poem for societal concerns and it is felt good.

And we can hear a woman crying far Perhaps a pack of wolves are on her An Indian village is it. We were born there. These men have not changed since their birth! , , , so true, , , a wonderful write this is, , ,

When the stars beam and the moon shies away in the clouds.... can't you see the beauty of that skyscape? ? .... Why see it as ominous? Ofcourse many things undesirable happen below the canopy of the sky. When blunt truths are stated, let there be fairy tales too for a comic relief.....While jouneying in the train of pathos, let us listen to songs of nightingales once for a change! Hope the landscape that is going to open before us is green and verdant! A wonderful write.. though I disagree with the spirit of the poem! A sure 10