Friday, February 15, 2013

A Land So Fair Comments

Rating: 4.7

A land that's overflowing with milk and honey
No need for food, clothing, goods or money
Neither sickness, sorrow, death nor pain
Nor shelter from the storm not even the rain
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Patricia Grantham
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Maria Gonzalez 31 August 2015

I quite enjoyed this poem. It came from your heart and the core of your beliefs. It spoke your truth.

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Melvina Germain 13 August 2015

I love this poem and hope and pray that one day I will walk the grounds in such a paradise...Thank you sister for this beautiful description.....

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Amitava Sur 31 October 2013

Wish I may place myself in that place right through........... That day I'll tell you Pat how rightly you're true. Very nice imagery to cool the sole..... love it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 August 2013

A place where life will never have to end. A journey to that land is what one yearns for.

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Louis Rams 30 July 2013

this is the beauties of heaven, high above the ground, where there is peace and love, and no sickness to be found where the words ' brother and sister and feelings are truly shown, and the love for one another is all that is known.

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Payal Parande 23 July 2013

it would be so wonderful to live on such land, beautifully crafted ma'am

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Joseph Anderson 13 July 2013

You laid your faith right out there and that is so good. Inspirational and uplifting. A heavenly Garden of Eden awaits, bless you

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Valsa George 08 June 2013

We are all hopefully waiting to meet in that land of bliss! You have painted God's abode in such euphoric details! A beautifully rhyming poem! !

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R.j. Wynn 04 May 2013

Great poem, love it.10's

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Neela Nath Das 12 March 2013

A Utopian conception it is! A beautiful world without any problem.Loved.

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Valerie Dohren 26 February 2013

Imaginative and inspired write - well penned.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 18 February 2013

yeah, agree with chandra a great poem with lovely rhyme n rhythm really enjoying when i read it thanks for sharing

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Chandra Thiagarajan 18 February 2013

Oh! What a paragon of an imagination! And what a wonderful poem with its rhyme and rhythm with music flowing in the land that is over flowing with milk and honey! !

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

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