Saturday, July 19, 2008

A Lament Of A Shattered Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wrote these words in the dark,
but even in the dark I'm not nearly as scared as I was,
when I recently realized that romance can actually kill.
Its not so bad, please girl just cheer up
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Justin Henry
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Kyle Shield Laster 20 July 2008

you're a very good poet. i favor rhyming stanzas myself... but you held my attention throughout this piece. nice work.

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