Wednesday, March 25, 2009

A Lady In Waiting Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I sit alone in this cold lonely night
I feel as though my heart has broken
I am prepared to pick up the million shattered pieces
Just to see your face again.
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June FeirCruz
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Barbara Terry 20 June 2009

Belief has some to do with what we go through in lost relationships, but mostly it is our unadulterated female stubborness that makes us take the defensive. When relationships fail us we are more cautious the next time, and then we find we've missed having someone nice in our lives. This is a very poignant piece sis, and tells us about our emotional frailties. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 May 2009

I v vaction for two weaks...and if i didnt find this site i too may hav felt like this 'I know that we are always in God's hands And I hope that He is holding me up right now For I feel so alone and so lost Waiting for you to come home to my heart' So great indeed..liked it so much...i m a buddhist..it says we should gather our own courage and stand up by ourselves, that's the hardest thing to do...i feel so lost too..cause some of my friends are not well with me, , , thanks.

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Les Derbyshire 30 March 2009

Beautifully written, thank you for this June. You have clearly worked at this poem to polish it and present it just as you would have it be. It's good to see such attention to producing good work. Thank you again. Les.

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