A Labourer’s Tale Comments

Far from cozy, the writing suggests the violence and even madness of those old days that often simmers beneath the surface of today's life.......Rajeshji..........very very well composed......10

Violence started as soon as the sons of Adams grown up. Allama Iqbal in his poem, Lenin Khuda Ke Huzoor mein, wrote: - Tu quadir-o-aadil hay magar tere jahan mein- - -Hayn talkh bahut banda-e-mazdoor ke auquat (You are Almighty and Just but in Your world the laborers are passing a hard time) anice write.............10

............very nicely written....99% of workers are employees of the 1%.....why does life have to be this way?

Meaningful write from your pen. Very true said in lines, , , From our obscured past to us represent The story of violence that we still carry into the present. Many truth hidden deep inside the soil and that history we carry forward. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

A great and truthful write, Violence is eons old, yet their has'nt been a saviour who could judge these souls, we humans have assumed the supreme write to punish to be ours............... Truthful and intriguing write

Violence is as old as human history... it is not something new....! Skull...less skeletons suggest that beheading was something common then! The gruesome acts of our forefathers are handed down to the progeny... But fortunately, there has ever been a messiah to save the world from total annihilation! Great write!

comrades lost fighting, good writing, I like it, Please read my poems and comment.