Tuesday, May 3, 2016

A Laborer's Spouse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fire is set leaving behind an aurora on sky,
Birds are back to the nests, no more fly,
The stars with moon take off their flight,
Ahead of them is a pleasant night,
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Edward Kofi Louis 11 May 2016

To wipe his sweat and remove the dirt. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Loke Kok Yee 10 May 2016

Those who have to sweat appreciates life better and a bit of hardship will build mental strengh Thank you sir1-10

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Kelly Kurt 10 May 2016

Many of the jobs I have worked throughout my life have been hard manual labor. Often, people would ask me why I do such jobs when I am so smart and creative. My answer is always, because I like it. There is a dignity in sweat, a pride in effort and a bond with comrades in the same sharing the same toil. a 10

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Seema Chowdhury 08 May 2016

Very narrative and a meaningful write

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Like animals labourers pass their lives........A wonderful line, a full description of the labourers life. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Khalid Saifullah 03 May 2016

What a beautiful poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 May 2016

Very deep with love and passion! Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 03 May 2016

A beautiful poem, encompassing the life of a labourer. Fantastic imagery to start the poem off.

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