Friday, May 19, 2006

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Rating: 5.0

A gloomy evening
I was in the red-light district of Yoshiwara, Japan.
In a restaurant I ordered 'Sashimi & Sake'
raw fish with garlic sauce and rice wine
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 December 2009

The Geisha the Japanese trained woman to entertain you…well at the end anticlimax wow! Must be you’ve sometime posted in subconscious Jap beauty [or wanted to rediscover the same in your spouse] and that surfaced in your dream… Excellent poem and scored ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Joe Breunig 25 June 2006

Thank you Nimal, for your thoughtfulness and this poetic dedication. One can never have too many friends.

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Duncan Wyllie 30 May 2006

Dreams are very interesting and I often see them as both a filter and a sign sometimes A thought -proking write Love Duncan X

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Jerry Hughes 20 May 2006

...nice twist Nimal. Much beter than a nightmare. Much!

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Sandra Fowler 19 May 2006

Dreams often have no explanation in reality and the mood lingers on. But since there is a reason for everything, there may be a reason for this one too. I agree with Sonny. It is disturbing. But very vivid and alive too. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sonny Rainshine 19 May 2006

Very complex and disturbing dream-poem. Dreams do get us to thinking sometimes. Maybe that's why I never seem to remember mine.

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