Wednesday, November 2, 2011

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Man is mortal and death is certain
So my beloved remove all the curtains
Hanging between you and reality
My boy mind well, it is your duty.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Aarzoo Mehek 03 December 2020

Loved reading it. A very thoughtful poem.

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Dipak Adhya 24 July 2020

A great philosophical thinking.... Enjoyed it...

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a philosophical approach......10++

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Indira Renganathan 13 June 2020

'Perhaps your craze to form relations And unusual greed for hoarding money Always helps you to forget often That you born alone and will die alone.'......these lines speak volumes about real life and its true face....great 10+++

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Savita Tyagi 08 June 2020

A poem of great wisdom flowing so naturally. Beautiful reminder of what should be importent in life.

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Chinedu Dike 24 April 2020

A witty philosophical reflection, an insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Ratnakar.

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Frank Russell 04 November 2019

A healthy dose of reality. Great write!

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A B Faniki 01 September 2019

A rich quatrian flavored with beautiful rhyme and rhythm. Thank u 4 such insightful poem. I love it

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 13 August 2019

Great philosophical statement in a poetic expression - That you born alone and will die alone. A beautiful poem with great thoughts!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2019

A great work! The last stanza makes the work endearing.....my pleasure revisiting this beautiful poem!

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Jane Campion 09 June 2019

The truths expressed in this poem make it standout. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

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Balnarayana Bandam 17 May 2019

Dear poet the content of the poem is very impressive Always helps you to forget often That you born alone and will die alone/with appreciation

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Perhaps your craze to form relations And unusual greed for hoarding money Always helps you to forget often That you born alone and will die alone.. beautiful

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 May 2019

Yes, you are right and very right. Death is certain and mortal body is uncertain.. Soul drives body and leaves. Being badly in love and hoarding money is thought provoking. This poem is amazingly and brilliantly penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 April 2019

A wonderful, insightful and perceptive write on life. Each stanza is imbued with words of wisdom. Liked the first stanza, to wit: " Remove all the curtains Hanging between you and reality" . Beautiful lines from a beautiful poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 22 March 2019

Man is mortal and death is certain... so nicely crafted... pc

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 March 2019

thoughtful and quite philosophical............

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 March 2019

nice one u earn 10 Maybe gone saturday,9th March 2019 so try to be reasonable and remain as good individual play no dual role and create no hurdle or wall Hasmukh Mehta From

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 March 2019

That you born alone and will die alone.....the truth! Scintillating poetic expression! A brilliant poem...I would love to find it among top 500 member poems sooner or later! Congratulations in advance! I have taken this beautiful poem to MyPoemList

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 February 2019

'That you born alone and will die alone'. The fundamental truth of life. But in pursuing the great pursuits of life man forgets this. If only he remains in touch with his soul. And this can be done by cultivating solitude. Very insightful work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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