Once upon a time, there was a man
Who came with a message
A message of peace which ran
Across the world like the blood passage.
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the title was already taken because there is a movie of heath ledger that has the same title. But it seems that the content is different and good. The poem is unique in a way
Zeinab you are talented and can narrate in a fabulous manner, I'm impressed and believe that one day you'll turn into a great poetess, it would require a hard work but you'll sure succeed. Millions of best wishes for you! Thanks for sharing! You deserve 10
Once upon a time there was a wondrous poet. That poet is you. Keep up the good work. Bob
Hello Angel, This poem of yours is so sweet and rich with vivid illustration.. I love this one cheers Angel. The Sage Anthony Edmond John
Zeinab, ...... I don't know what to say but God Bless You as you deserve it, I see your feelings towards our Prophet Mohammed (Peace Be Upon Him) through this poem. I was so attracted to this poem even from reading its name, I'm so happy for you and your fantastic talent. I'm waiting for more and God Bless You again! ! .
GOD bless u! ! ! i am very happy because i see young fellows like you writing wonderful touching words.......thanks for sharing my friend.... :)
a great poem for your age. nrration keeps the reader being engaged.10marks
Good narration...flowing style...good awareness poem, Zeinab...i liked the message and morals the poem carries inside...thanks...10
Marvellous writes, the impact stays for long in my mind.Keep on writing Zeinab.You're talented.
a history in a prose..nicely penned..detailed and clear..beautiful as expressed..i think, next to this is the introduction of ISLAM..grace
A great poem Zeinab, your faith is so evident and this poem is really great and talking about the best person in this world....your message has been delivered well....a 10+++ from me....Merna
Oh yes dat great heroic man was our dear God's dear messenger Mustafa s.a.w. U wrote such an aweinspiring tribute to him, wellresearchd into his life. Pls read n coment any my poems too.