A Knife Behind Me. Comments

The feeling of having a knife behind can make us really strong to face all that can come........ a warning and also to get ready to face.... thank you for this poem dear poetess. tony

To watch your steps in life. Thanks for sharing.

A thoughtful poem, whether irrespective of a knife, whisper or environment, they all alert you about the stumbling side of the life's path so that mentally you get strong enough to move forward boldly and convincingly.

A good poem indeed. Artfully penned with depth of insight. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful poem Tadasha. There is often knife behind us to make us alert and stronger ever. Time will keep on moving nor we can stop it. I loved it.

Yes, its true that neither the time had been stopped before nor will be stopped. Very nice poem.

As long we are aware the situations alertness exists. Time keeps moving unmindful of any. Nice expressions!

A great poem Tadasha, I really loved it.

The mind set creates the problem reason may be any knife is always behind the best metaphor used knife lovely thanks

no one is there to stop you, my dear daughter, go on. wonderful.