Thursday, April 27, 2006

A Kitchen Lament Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why does the fly create so much havoc
when he is just passing his time away
He comes through your window looking
for food, how can he be so rude. He takes
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Dee Daffodil 11 September 2006

LOL....This one is a hoot Sylvia...I love it..but not the fly! ! Hugs, dee

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Ernestine Northover 07 June 2006

It's certainly horrible when you see them alight on your meat, or dessert. Yucks! I go ballistic trying to capture them. Great energetic poem. Love Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 15 May 2006

Then I will have to go hungry for a while Put away the spray, let the fly live another day Great fun here Love Duncan X

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A really entertaining read and well-put-together - and inspired subject matter! Poetry about the little things.... grand.

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Nicola Burkett 30 April 2006

A very funny poem, i like the way you portray everyday images in your work. Very original, very funny. You get top marks from me Sincerely Nickie x x

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Sandra Fowler 27 April 2006

Very amusing poem, Sylvia. Thank you for making me smile. Love, Sandra

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Bill Grace 27 April 2006

Sylvia, Thank you for the nice chuckle to start the day in Texas. Bill Grace

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