Sunday, December 11, 2005

A Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

I run through the rainbow
Drenching my mouth
In the pastels - tints
Of its passing,
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Anna Cellmer
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John Tiong Chunghoo 20 February 2007

a colourful poem more exciting than rainbow. good one anna.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 04 December 2006

I appreciate the poem, amazingly articulatin of love that deserves great applause

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Howard Johnson 19 October 2006

This write shows a great level of creativity, at least a 10

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Esther Leclerc 25 September 2006

Anna, the imagery here is original and truly wonderful in this romantic poem. Esther : ]

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Peyman Safarinejad 21 August 2006

Dear Anna, I really liked the vivid images in your 'A Kiss'.

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Anjana Aravind 23 May 2006

Very nice poem Anjana

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Florencia Gomez 16 March 2006

it'is perfect.......it is perfect.....thanks........f

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Kelly marie Berry 01 March 2006

this is one of many good pomes i have seen you are good at what you do and this is really creative

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poetry addict 26 February 2006

I gave it 10 in voting it deserves

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Nicky McNeil 04 January 2006

I so enjoyed this poem the imagrey and the passion thanks for sharing this

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Francis Curran 14 December 2005

ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFULY CRAFTED POEMS I HAVE READ ON ANY SITE. YOU HAVE AMAZING TALENT AND A WONDERFUL STYLE OF YOUR OWN, MOST WRITERS SPEND ALL THEIR LIFE TRYING TO FIND THEIR OWN VOICE.THIS IS SO PURE IN FORM AND TONE, IT STANDS MUCH TALLER THAN ITS ACTUAL SIZE.IT HARD FOR ME TO GO INTO TECHNICAL DETAILS OF POETRY AS I AM NOT ATTUNED TO SUCH THINGS, BUT ALLTHOUGH IN A STRAIGHT JACKET OF LANDGUAGE RIGHT NOW, I KNOW IT IS BRILLIANT AND I LOVE IT.

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Anna Cellmer

Anna Cellmer

Olsztyn, Poland
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