I run through the rainbow
Drenching my mouth
In the pastels - tints
Of its passing,
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I appreciate the poem, amazingly articulatin of love that deserves great applause
This write shows a great level of creativity, at least a 10
Anna, the imagery here is original and truly wonderful in this romantic poem. Esther : ]
Dear Anna, I really liked the vivid images in your 'A Kiss'.
this is one of many good pomes i have seen you are good at what you do and this is really creative
I so enjoyed this poem the imagrey and the passion thanks for sharing this
ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFULY CRAFTED POEMS I HAVE READ ON ANY SITE. YOU HAVE AMAZING TALENT AND A WONDERFUL STYLE OF YOUR OWN, MOST WRITERS SPEND ALL THEIR LIFE TRYING TO FIND THEIR OWN VOICE.THIS IS SO PURE IN FORM AND TONE, IT STANDS MUCH TALLER THAN ITS ACTUAL SIZE.IT HARD FOR ME TO GO INTO TECHNICAL DETAILS OF POETRY AS I AM NOT ATTUNED TO SUCH THINGS, BUT ALLTHOUGH IN A STRAIGHT JACKET OF LANDGUAGE RIGHT NOW, I KNOW IT IS BRILLIANT AND I LOVE IT.
a colourful poem more exciting than rainbow. good one anna.