Wednesday, September 17, 2008

A Kiss Unrelinquished Comments

Rating: 2.8

A glint of light
flashed through her eye
flecks of dust too
floated there.
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Lonnie Hicks
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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 10 October 2009

Glitches and hitches are but natural between partners. Wisdom and true love lies in harmonizing and sublimating the differences. Your description of the ‘tear’ is as much graphic and photographic as it is poetic. How well you’ve captured the effect of love-stirred tears! “There is nothing more intimate than tears shed, retrieved and shared; touched by finger-tips” A tearful cry has a soulful, cathartic effect. A touching composition. #10.

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