Saturday, April 19, 2008

A Kiss-Short Story Comments

Rating: 4.3

((Slightly amended. Written for 'The Dropout' story project. Inspired by a scene in a telly western)) .

'May I kiss you? ' John asked timidly, fearing that she would say, 'No! '
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Eve Roper 15 May 2018

we that are thoughtful do consider the other person feelings.. thank you for reading my Thanksgiving poem Hugs Eve

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Paul Butters 30 May 2018

Thanks Eve. The more caring people there are, the better.

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A splendid song of sweet spirituality!

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Paul Butters 15 May 2018

Thanks Howard. Odd hearing it read in an emotionless voice by that Poemhunter Lady on the video. Could only happen here! Interesting.

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Paul Butters 06 September 2010

Early stuff and not quite a poem at this stage.

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Paul Butters 27 March 2010

Okay, nostalgia wins! A golden Oldie.

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