Wednesday, October 17, 2018

A Kiss - Senryu Comments

Rating: 3.7

urge of the body
nerves ignites the sensation
touch by the dry lips
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Sando Hussam
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Dr Antony Theodore 27 December 2018

body, lips, urge, emotion, desire and passion. very fine poem. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 November 2018

A kiss! ! To touch the lips of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2018

Beautifully encapsulated with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Sando.

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S H 21 October 2018

My pleasure to read your comments, I am a student of poetry. Just a try.

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