A Kiss Of Death. Comments

a very captivating poem personifying death. A great write, well penned together. Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading it. keep writing

nice poem. and i think, kiss means someone is loving you. welcome the love.

There is no excuses for the untimely visitor who takes the life from an individual in unknown moments and unpredicable ways and circumstances. It does its duty as destined to once own life and surviving family members and friends have no alternative suggestions to rescue the soul from flying from the body which is the real death it is said.Here the very natural poem with apt words and vocabularies is very nice to read and entertain and think about the destiny and the final fair well.

I like this mesmerizing poem. I go up one level after another to the culmination - surrender. Dangerous for you to be as equipped as this at 16. I have contemplated something as dangerous - paranormal romance - but kept me awake for several nights after. Sometimes - oftentimes? - our imagination runs away from us, and our reality is hopelessly entangled with fantasy. Do you agree about the surreal quality of life that poets lead? The highest form of opium - poems!

love it. it was really good

Death is something that i have thought about a great lot and will still think about when i turn 80 years old. No one can escape death and maybe that is why it is comforting in a way. Because in that simple sentence their lyes the promise of an end, of some thing that no one can change. Loved the poem. Will look forward to more of you poetry because you are talented beyond belief.

Oh my god that is so good I don't even have words for it

The last kiss lol. like ittt!

Amazing. I can't even hold a match to that.

DAMMM! ! ! so lustful and so filled with love for Him! i too am in love with Him... so seductive to me all the time. knows exactly what to say to be with him all the time great write: P ~Bella

I am with you, CL. I can't take much more of this depth of harrowing dullness of reality, whatever that means.

When death comes you either accept it gently and walk with it hand in hand or go kicking and screaming. This is an amazing poem where you accept death and keep your dignity at the same time as being humble. Love it lots.

Wow, this is an amazing poem, truly and greatly written well.

Yes, when death comes we have to bow down everything here...great write..10++ And here I invite you to read my poem(A perfect ethnic cleanser) ...

Yeah U're right we have no choice it's our destiny, perfect poem, strongly written.10++