Tuesday, October 30, 2007
A Kiss Melts Comments
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Turning me blue
blithe thoughts had come like snakes
wriggling, biting, leaving tooth marks.
I remained holding a dew drop
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Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple
22 January 2008
You've chosen powerful and vivid imagery for this piece. I loved the ending lines, beautifully effective.
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Goldy Locks
07 November 2007
a riftquake certain to incinerate me up despite my wedged dissent.
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8/13/2025 1:40:46 PM # 1.0.0
A wonderful poem indeed with a powerful imagery. Congrats!