Monday, August 5, 2019

A Kiss In The Rains Comments

Rating: 5.0

To soothe my mental strains,
To ease my physical stains,
I want rains.
To calm down my mental distress,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 August 2019

A lovely and sweet poem. Rains can do magic in our life aside from its vital role in the maintenance of ecosystem. Well crafted write, Sir Akhtar.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 August 2019

A kiss in the rains I wish and she knits. I want rains. shorter verses say all

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Kelly Kurt 06 August 2019

After nearly 6 weeks with no rain, I got some last night.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 August 2019

No one knows the nectar of the heaven that makes gods immortal, but one upon earth is rain that makes life over death immortal. A lovely little poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 August 2019

An excellent replenishing poetic expression, sir Akhtar...10++++

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Hassan Hayati 06 August 2019

rain is the mercy of God. rain washes the souls the bodies, the hearts the eyes too. beautiful, sir Jawad.

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 August 2019

I want rain o yeah, I want rain to shower my pain to drain away all pains to gain the sublime spiritual brains........///

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Dave Greenwald 05 August 2019

Rain and strain calls for more of the former.

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