Sunday, November 11, 2007

A Kiss In The Rain-07 Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was at his friend Jay's house
And she was at her friend Alice's house
They were across the street from eachother, literally
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Jenae Clark 21 January 2008

wow... i really liked this a lot....

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Jade Fish 13 November 2007

Gosh what a loser....alll that romantic kissess just for a one nite stand! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! but it was a good poem tho, it just made me mad cuz i thougth it was gonna end happily! ! ! ! ! : P

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 13 November 2007

AWSOME WRITE! ! ! it's hella cute. Great work.

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nawww, how cute... until i got to the end... I hate one night stands... especially when one of them gets their hopes up and ends up with shattered dreams... too bad it was a true story... Loves it tho star! ! love all ur poems lol... Kaila -xXx-

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raven jade 11 November 2007

one sad song under heaven..a touch of melancholic rain.

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no need ta knw
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