Friday, November 2, 2012

A Kiss Goodbye Comments

Rating: 4.5

My heart beats
As I watch the moonbeams
Dance in the midnight breeze

I smile softly as I recall a time
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Kaila George
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 27 May 2014

Good morning poet Kaila. Wow! I did enjoy this very passionate poem of lost love and romance, the imagery was amazing. Thank you for the recent reviews of my work, your comments... I am honored. On the video: You must start with your own video, such as the original you made for YouTube. Then there are instructions on your poem page that asks if you want to add a music of video track. Simply upload it and PH does the rest. You best bet is to have PH people help you, Send them contact forms and ask your question. I hope this helps, Loyd

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Khairul Ahsan 07 August 2013

The last four stanzas are simply superb!

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Kaila George

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