Saturday, March 25, 2023

A Kiss Goodbye Comments

Rating: 5.0

Another day
And soon, I'll be on my way
To a job that I hate
But I cannot be late
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Andrew Dabar
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Bri Edwards 09 April 2023

5 STARS. bri : )

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Andrew Dabar 15 April 2023

Your my first and only reader, I think, and my first stars. Thank you! : ))

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Bri Edwards 09 April 2023

I LIKE THE RHYMING AND DESCRIPTION OF GOING-TO-WORK TIME. IS IT TRUE TO YOUR LIFE, I WONDER.

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Andrew Dabar 15 April 2023

Thanks, Bri! Yes, once upon a time, this poem was true in my life. I remember the details of that particular morning as if it were only yesterday.

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Bri Edwards 09 April 2023

WELOME, 'NEW POET', TO PH. YOUR LAST LINE GAVE ME A SMALL LAUGH. BRI : )

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Bri Edwards 09 April 2023

welcomw to PH, 'new poet'. the last line gave me a liile laugh.

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