Thursday, September 11, 2008

A Kiss Good-Bye(Written 7-31-03) ...This Poem Was Inspired By A Letter That Was Written By A Mental Patient-A Letter She Allowed Me To Read That She Had Written To Her Boyfriend An Comments

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You have damaged my heart so many times
and have made no attempt to correct it
now I am letting you know that our love is on the line
cause when you had me-you refused me-abused me
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Bernard Ceasar
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Monika Marie 18 September 2008

'you will never miss your water until your well runs dry-I hope you thirst for my love and die- as the presence of my beauty leave your eyes-not a physical death, but more of an emotional suicide-' Absolutely brilliant! There's is nothing more hurtful than your heart being torn and in these words you have shown that in great imagery. Exquisite.

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Tanya Stanford 12 September 2008

Honestly most women feel this way when betrayed. Brilliant piece

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Bernard Ceasar

Bernard Ceasar

Marion County, South Carolina
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