A Kiss From A Rose Comments

Beautiful rendition of words in a well encapsulated piece nicely penned with insight. A well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing Jake and do remain enriched.

austere abyss grey's obscurity eternal perpetuity intombing with a kiss. I was wondering about the usage of words and the Coinage of words together.. you are a master of words……. Conveying a lot. Thank you dear poet.. tony

In stone I make my pledges And intomb it with a kiss...[][ Jake Deeds Rhythmic endings of the lines.. i like it very much. the use of words and its meaning. very very nice poem. much better than writing long poems. thank you very much. tony

This is art. Magnificent poetry.

Sometimes a piece of art has no meaning - and its sheer beauty lays within that fact... As the Mona Lisa Smile. It's the hint of a secret that is so mesmerizing sometimes - and not always its reveal. Your palette of words here create a beautiful mind swirl. The fact that it takes me nowhere is what ravished me so.... In deed a moment well spent - reading this. Thank you...

Well-penned. I like it. Kudos

Very cool write: ^) Congrats on getting POD.

'From the hue of grey’s obscurity And time’s eternal perpetuity' RAB

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal