Saturday, February 9, 2019

A Kiss Day Comments

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The prince took her to a lady doctor the date had passed
She was not feeling well the fairy looked too dull
A few tests were made and the couple came back home
During the noon the mermaid missed the customary lull.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 14 February 2019

o its a natural love// beautiful poem

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Khairul Ahsan 12 February 2019

'The prince was speechless but it ended with a kiss' - so nice! Having read your beautiful biography written in verses, I felt a surging wave of respect overwhelm me, for three generation stalwarts- your grandfather, your father and yourself. God Bless you, Akhtar Sahab!

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 February 2019

The prince was speeless! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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