Lost kisses lost kisses
With the wind may fly
After finding him sleeping
On his shoulder you lie
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Outstanding write, fairy tale like in delivery but carries deep sadness in its heart. Kiss deep the soul... with this poem, you definitely kissed mine - as you must have touched so many others.10+
Kiss the soul. Nice message Elena. Thanks for this nice piece!
The emotion of the ocean caught this wave. Wonderful poetry.++10 Robert
Good rendition of words in a beautiful love poem nicely brought forth with insight. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Elena.
Then, all kisses! Once: kiss deep: the soul, not the skin! kiss deep very nice poem. thank oyu dear poetess.
WOW! THIS IS the most BEAUTIFUL and TOUCHING poem I ever read. I am not a victim of the tsunami this info mentioned, BUT this poem touched me through and through. For a Most Touching Poem, we never have explanations, but this absolute magnificent poem, humble in its words and attitude will surely touch still myriad persons WORLDWIDE. The intentions were so pure and innocent, and that IS the KEY WHY this poem was chosen to be played on stage, my dearest Poetess. All glory and greatest applause for YOU, this poem goes deeper than the deepest skin, this poem will remain in our MIND and it will be a CLASSIC Poem like our contemporaries. And that since 14th January 2011 already submitted. WOW!
a beautiful poem of much feelings of love and understanding? .............superbly written.
kiss deep! ! ! kiss the soul when you kiss not the skin! ! ! with the heart of a child we shall love. let goodness prevail always. written in the context of Tsunami this remains a wonderful poem. for all those who really care to read and understand this poem it is a great asset for the soul. thank you very much dear poet. tony
most passionate write yet by ingenuity with brilliant imagery and metaphor kisses craves to kiss as ebbs cry for tide for heart to resonate yet in between, vacuum croons to sing blue.
Wow! beautiful poem- seemingly romantic. but with deeper meanings. kiss deep: the soul, not the skin! -Vacuum any sad cry! Spick and span cleaned The heart of a child Once again let rise! Yes, that is what a kiss should do- clean the heart of the partner of all the pain and agonies. Such a soothing effect the poem has on the reader, that I enjoyed reading it many times over. The presentation and phrasing and vocabulary and quite dramatic. It is small wonder that it could be played on the stage and enjoyed and appreciated. Good work Congrats.10.
The soul, not the skin! This love, it seems quite deep, indeed! Thanks for sharing!
This is quite an emotional poem... Lost kisses lost kisses With the wind may fly
You do not have to be surprised at the level of recognition it got, because the emotions flowing from this poem is inexplicable
You do not have to be surprised at through level of recognition it got, because the emotions flowing from this poem is inexplicable
I can feel the raw emotion that created through each line..! & pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my site too poemtheart thank you.. :)