Sunday, November 26, 2017

A Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

I close my eyes
I close my ears
let your lips come in contact of my lips
I want to know the miracle
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Valsa George 01 December 2017

True Love never weakens with time! A poem celebrating the immortality of love! Sensuous and beautiful write! A 10

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Indira Renganathan 28 November 2017

A symbol of a long lived lovely life is this poem...deep in love and high in romance...God bless you dear friend

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Khalida Bano Ali 26 November 2017

What a poem! It's amazingly wonderful..................................................

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2017

Kiss me again and forgot everything... the poetic expression is adorable A great Romantic poem

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Rajnish Manga 26 November 2017

This is real a masterstroke. Looks like a fairly long and scintillating journey is here for a quick recap. Congratulations & Best Wishes, Akhtar Jawad Sahab. I want to know the miracle how eyes and ears are grown in the lips.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

Kissing once again and forgetting both sequences are amazing but still this act carries emotion and memory. We are wishing you very happy golden jubilee of life. Closing eyes you open and you feel miracle around you. God is merciful. May he bring unlimited happiness for you for fortunate living. Excellent! ..10

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