Monday, February 4, 2013

A Kiss! Comments

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He looked at his mouth wide open,
Not showing of earth that fallen,
Only the dirty teeth and tongue shown,
In that broken mirror, that was stolen.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Ernest Makuakua 14 March 2016

what a beautiful piece thanks for sharing

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Valsa George 05 February 2013

The warmth behind each gesture of love is what that matters! He prepared himself to plant that kiss in such a way that it should turn a moment of bliss and fulfillment for the giver and the receiver! A poem that deals with an experience beyond the terrestrial!

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Dave Walker 04 February 2013

A beautiful poem, a wonderful write.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 February 2013

Kissing is heavenly for a better world. symbol of True love.

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