A Kiss Comments

beautiful kisse sI thought I read it A kiss on the lips Or a kiss on the neck A kiss from someone you're happy you met. A kiss of lost innocence I love kisses but none kiss me so just read my kiss poetry and moms smiles pops remembering lol

i guess it is my third time here. i can't get enough of your kisses! ! ! ! ! ! ! i plan to place this knowing poem into my/our June 2017's showcase. this June showcase is just for poems by female poets' poems, but i'll bet women/girls and (some) men/boys can relate to this. thanks. bri :)

A Kiss Resonates With Time Seasoned Separations a kiss of lost innocence resonates with time seasoned separations life is seasoned with a family of kiss variety cultural interactions love bestowed in a kiss blesses with choice emotional responses Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'A Kiss' by the poet Elena Plotkin. Dedicated to the poet Elena Plotkin.

A kiss of lost innocence resonates with time seasoned separation, yet life is seasoned with a family of kiss variety cultural interactions, love bestowed in a kiss blesses with choice emotional responses.

This is a powerful poem with strong emotions at play. Great write.

A kiss of love with care. Nice work.

A kiss on the lips Or a kiss on the neck A kiss from someone you're happy you met. A kiss of lost innocence. you are comparing and contrasting the kiss of innocence and the loss of innocence. yes these are human experiences. we go through it. this is the path of life. it makes mature. thank you for this thoughtful poem. tony

The kiss of lost innocence...Indeed! You write ever so well. I miss to read more of your nuggets in the coming days. Kudos!

Very deep, very nicely done. This work has a certain quality that evokes The Seven Ages of Man. Well done.

A creative composition that is both meaningful and moving.

well, it's been a year and a half (and a few kisses; too few) since i last commented. i had forgotten that i'd read it. i didn't laugh this time; must be getting tired. i was a late bloomer in the kissing department (and a few other departments also!) . now i've been there, done that, a few times over. give me the candy kisses and ice cream and i; ll be happy! bri :)

I like it! short and sweet and lovely. Thank you for your comment on And I Stop Laughing! ~mye3

And what about Him who doth kiss so oft On your cheeks in the gentle breeze On your furrowed brow in sunlight warm and soft And at night with moonbeams of ease....? Very good poem and I welcome you to my page too. Wishing you a very happy, prosperous and poetic new year from India.

I am also on the way to write a kiss of different type. almost complete, will be posted very soon. beautiful write.

i'm not sure i agree with Khairul, below. after innocence is lost comes a lot of work and sometimes heartbreak! i laughed at the last stanza...out loud. i have added this, or will, to MyPoemlist. well done, good and faithful poet. try, if you will, my poem 88 Kiss With A Twist...... it is number 88 today anyway. i had to search for it as i could not remember the exact title. i usually find something i don't like about a poem, but i didn't find anything here. thanks for sharing. bri

Ah-ha, you hit the mark. Love your work. Adeline

A kiss of lost innocence. That is what is preferred most.