Monday, January 14, 2008

A Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.5

Of all raw passions, kiss alone
Seals lips but opens hearts
So short its distance
Be it of blood or two souls,
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David Wood 25 December 2020

I like this poem very much. A kiss says so much more than words.

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Mrudula Rani 27 July 2020

A kiss is a pronunciation of affinity. " Itself raises as a moment in time's memory" . Truly beautiful.

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Juliet Languedoc 04 July 2020

powerful expressions speaking with the absence to words. Speaks to the imagination. Colorful!

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Sankar Sarkar 29 April 2020

exquisitely penned this poem! Kiss is a bliss of heaven in aesthetic manner has been recapitulated here! Obviously great piece!

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Captain Cur 01 March 2020

The emotive power of a kiss expressed by gifted lips. A beautiful write!

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Ms Doubtfire 29 December 2019

I don't understand how you hit the right notes! You are tooooooòooo good to be true!

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 30 November 2019

Very nice 10++++++++++++++++

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Maxim Muyu 15 November 2019

very nice desription, I like it.so nice.

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Nice expression about the kiss

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Bharati Nayak 09 July 2019

Of all raw passions, kiss alone Seals lips but opens hearts So short its distance Be it of blood or two souls, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Love so sublime Whose sound silent Yet its echo lasts as truth- A wish turned Godward. - - - - - - A magnificent write, thanks for sharing.

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Denis Mair 09 July 2019

I like the way you describe a kiss as an echo in silence. Feelings reverberate as a chasm is bridged. You have found the words, sweetly paradoxical, to evoke this moment of sanctified awareness.

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 May 2019

Love so sublime Whose sound silent/////////exactly; superb poem, it's great impressive poem

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The raw passion, of course, reduces the distance between two souls, creates an immortal moment in memory and a sublime mark of love. Thank you dear poet....10

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Namita Rani Panda 11 April 2019

Lovely lines on one of the finest raw passions

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Nancy Chambers 07 March 2019

Very nice words. Enjoyed reading Thanks for reminding me about your poems

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Akhtar Jawad 20 February 2019

Of all raw passions, kiss alone Seals lips but opens hearts Beautifully narrated a lovely truth.

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Michael Walker 14 February 2019

Some deep thoughts on a simple thing like a kiss. Kissing is a superb feeling, I remember, French kissing too. I have almost forgotten what kissing was like now, but I will not forget your poem.

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Tom Allport 08 February 2019

A wonderful write of a kiss most liked? ......well written Yoonoos

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Rajaram Ramachandran 16 January 2019

Thank and no mention please ARE THE TWO WORDS TOUCH THE HEART OF ANYONE

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Gloriette Cheska Irigayen 09 January 2019

(a kiss) Seals lips but opens hearts. Truly this line is striking. Indeed a kiss can mend a broken heart and find a lost soul

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