Friday, April 30, 2010

A Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dipped my tongue to enjoy the sugary sweet.
Passion bloomed in thick syrupy emotions.
We stuck to each other enjoying the treat
That love had to offer - passionate kisses.
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Leslie Alexis
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No Ones Bidness 30 July 2011

Loved the way you ended the poem, I really liked reading it

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Jennifer .. 12 July 2011

i absolutely love this poem it describes perfectly all the emotions going through your head when you get a first kiss or any kiss <3 it

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Sooooooooooooooooo picturesque…and ‘silent explosions’ golden kiss in El Dorado 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Lady Grace 03 May 2010

owwwww...language of a kiss cant be expressed, but ur lines do...so nice..i like the second stanza...

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