A kiss, becomes a pact between two souls,
penetrating barriers that shy doubt patrols.
for surely not one earthly joy exists,
to bring such utter comfort like a kiss.
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you have real experience in kissing.. nice to read. kiss from the child to death. different levels of life and l ove you have portayes in ur poem. thank u for sharing
Your poem describes the many kinds of emotions that a kiss brings and it is done so artfully, Ann. Wonderful - a '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn
this is perfect in everyway.. reminds me of my piece called, Sacrifice fo rUs. plz take a look
Hi Ann, this is so beautifully and tenderly written and worth a 10... well done. Eddie.
This is a beautiful piece of work Ann, so tenderly written. Best wishes, Andrew x
Ann, i can't think of a single base you failed to cover, in your very vivid depiction of the many reasons why we are compelled to place a kiss on someone....very inventive & heart-warm theme, indeed! As per usual, you never disappoint! FjR
Such a lovely poem Ann! Another delightful work of art thank you! ! *10*! Best wishes! And Merry Christmas to you & your family! ! ! Friend Thad
There is untold magic in a kiss An excellent poem intervoven between idea of kiss of life to kiss of death.This untold magic of kiss has been told in a plain and straightforward manner.Very well expressed.10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan