Tuesday, December 23, 2008

A Kiss. Comments

Rating: 5.0

A kiss, becomes a pact between two souls,
penetrating barriers that shy doubt patrols.
for surely not one earthly joy exists,
to bring such utter comfort like a kiss.
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COMMENTS
Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 29 November 2014

There is untold magic in a kiss An excellent poem intervoven between idea of kiss of life to kiss of death.This untold magic of kiss has been told in a plain and straightforward manner.Very well expressed.10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 May 2010

you have real experience in kissing.. nice to read. kiss from the child to death. different levels of life and l ove you have portayes in ur poem. thank u for sharing

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Laurie Hill 06 August 2009

So very tender....So very beautifully written......

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 08 April 2009

magic indeed gets us all in a trance u amazing

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Marilyn Lott 22 January 2009

Your poem describes the many kinds of emotions that a kiss brings and it is done so artfully, Ann. Wonderful - a '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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this is perfect in everyway.. reminds me of my piece called, Sacrifice fo rUs. plz take a look

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Eddie Larkin 29 December 2008

Hi Ann, this is so beautifully and tenderly written and worth a 10... well done. Eddie.

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Andrew Blakemore 27 December 2008

This is a beautiful piece of work Ann, so tenderly written. Best wishes, Andrew x

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 December 2008

Ann, i can't think of a single base you failed to cover, in your very vivid depiction of the many reasons why we are compelled to place a kiss on someone....very inventive & heart-warm theme, indeed! As per usual, you never disappoint! FjR

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Thad Wilk 23 December 2008

Such a lovely poem Ann! Another delightful work of art thank you! ! *10*! Best wishes! And Merry Christmas to you & your family! ! ! Friend Thad

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