A Kiss Comments

a seeming two are known as one no longer me and you nice lines

'....the universe so vast in space; becomes a very tiny place...' I love this line, it's the uniqueness and the power of perfect love entwined in a kiss!

'Sweetness is on your lips like honey flavoured early morning dew' Rachel Ann Butler

David I have read many pove poems in my time, and I too write of love, but truly this is inspired work. Many tens, and please go on producing from your heart. Greetings from Fay Slimm, Cornwall U.K.

just one loving kiss, , , we long for, , , here is a very good poem penned with consistent metaphor and passion

Woww..that is truly beautiful...wonderful! ! ! -so romantic(sigh)

Adding this to my favorites. The ultimate compliment. Great writing.~Beau.

you obviously understand what love is when it is mutual This a poets poetry

Because love flows and joins this is Love’s gift to all to know you are so vast, not small joined in abundant bliss that’s truly universal and found in just one loving kiss, I love everything about this poem, the flow was freat, love the stanza in this, again great write, ~10~ your friend Tracy

And all the Angels stop and stare the stars in their travels pause the sands of time suspend their race the universe so vast in space becomes a very tiny place. Because love flows and joins this is Love’s gift to all ......................................loved these lines

David, I can't top the comments below (you have quite a fan club!) , but I do think this poem is very beautiful! I think your inspiration for this poem...is indeed a lucky woman! Hugs, Dee

David, this is absolutely DIVINE, I love it! But then I am the world's most slushy romantic going, so perhaps you knew that! ! Tee Hee! Just delightful, I'm adding it to my favs as I may need to read this again (in private!) . Love Helen xx

Dear David, I believe that this may be the most romantic, loving, tender heartfelt tribute of love that I've ever incountered or read or heard. Tres Magnifique! Positively full of a 'perfect love for just one.' Your wife got better than a 'keeper' the day she said 'I Do! ' I wish I could give it four tens to make up for some man here without a heart who brought down it's value with a low number. Your writing is grand but apparently someone is jealous of you here.....make no nevermind to him, the 'it' is worthless and not worthy of even having the opportunity to glance at it, never mind savor it. Keep on writing, you are beyond excellent in your expression of emotion.~~~~~~~~~~LOVE, marci.xo

So romantic and so beautiful. 10!

Just enjoyed it! 10 for it.

Another cracker, David...!