A Kiss. Comments

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Most beautiful. I like your use of s and m words, as well as the rhymes.

This is so beautiful.

amen. Need I say more

Short and sweet as the kiss she gave you! Beautiful, Charlie. You write with such smooth, rhyming simplicity, that your work is always a pleasure to read. Only, give us more, more, Moore! Linda

Sweet words... so tender the kiss...