Tuesday, May 16, 2006

A Kiss Comments

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Pulse begins to race
Always remember your face
Hair as red as fire
Beauty that I could admire
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Isaac Helms
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Chen Kasher 26 May 2006

I like this poem's use of ambiguity. It's unclear how meaningful the kiss is, or why it's being immortalized in a poem. I like your work.

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