Tuesday, October 2, 2018

A Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.8

How can a goal become a dream
You chase but don't wish
How could a laughter come out of an ache
There is something that always miss
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Antony Theodore 08 June 2019

How can a goal become a dream You chase but don't wish..This is wisdom. work hard and strive so that you may achieve your dreams. thank u for this idea dear poetess. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2018

Everything could go wrong but you hold on Until you are caught in the net like a fish How you could expect which you haven't seen But faith in you gives a kiss.......so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem nicely executed.

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 October 2018

Hi Rini “How can you be happy When life is empty “ Beautifully written.. Congratulations Rini

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 October 2018

I have composed many book worth of Kissy poems but this is the first faith- kiss poem I have read you teach well Rini Until you are caught in the net like a fish How you could expect which you haven't seen But faith in you gives a kiss

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Lamar Cole 02 October 2018

This is a great thought invoking poem about a kiss.

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