Sunday, October 25, 2015

A Kinetic Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rise like clouds and fall like rains,
Roam below the blue sky,
Sing with a friend and dance with ally,
Wash out the acids and kill the pains,
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Akhtar Jawad
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M Asim Nehal 27 October 2015

Great imagery and nice sensual poem.Liked they rhythm and meter of your poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2015

A rainbow is needed to light heart and this speaks about life that shines with wonderful love. Wise sharing.....10

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Kelly Kurt 25 October 2015

You are the best at waxing about love

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Loke Kok Yee 25 October 2015

The art of loving in a beautiful poem Thank you sir-10

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Khalid Saifullah 25 October 2015

What a kinetic poem................................................................

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