A Kindly Word Comments

Not all critics are unfriendly. As someone who has held a pen - even a quill - I was wondering if the uneven syllable counts in stanza one and the different rhythm in stanza two were intentional. If not, you might like to look at metre as well as rhyme.

Very apt depiction of a critic. Love it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Excellent write, filled with much wisdom and truth.. Each person has his own gift in life Andrew, you need not defend yours, as you are trully one of the best poets on here, and please know one of my favorites, , , NO, my favorite...... Bonnie

This is so strong Andrew. Rhyme sets a high standard, that unfortunately society doesn't follow as it is so much less structured now. I work with both as I like to think I am free (but am not of course) but do follow the commandments that are supposed to make, and not break society as is happening now. What a school for thought this all this. I admire your talent, your truth, and your beautiful soul. Karin Anderson

Excellent thought...10... Tsira

A brilliant retort against those 'critics' whose aim is to score points, rather than to make constructive suggestions. Your work may be traditional in form, but it is always relevant and original in content. This one is no exception. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

An amazing work. I like the way you have ended this wonderful poem. A superb poem.

The critic builds very little Least of all respect And so perhaps the greatest verse For them lies dorment yet Andrew, anyone who has truly read your works will know the power they contain You are one of my personal favourites here, and one of the reasons for that is that you show that bricks and mortar are of little use unless they are built into something beautiful, , YOU'RE A STAR* SHINE ON>>>>>>>>>>>>> Love duncan X

Okay, I'll shake your hand Andrew for this is a great write. Nicely presented. All for one and one for all. Rhymers unite. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

lovely poem, i do appreciate, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

Nothing but praise from me Andrew. Well done. Ann

A well crafted verse indeed, Andrew. I like your style. Thanks and best regards Richard

Way to go Andrew, delightful read, well executed and thought provoking! ! ! *10*! ! Best regard! Friend Thad

I agree to your proposition, since ages Poetry is esteemed more than prose, poet critics will never be harsh for them poem is their child. the rhyme adds so much pleasure and adds quickness of repartee. very well composed, really liked the thoughts.