Wednesday, June 1, 2005

A Killing Comments

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It was a hole, size of a dime.
Had penetrated his left eye
a Southern California crime
they use their guns there, never shy.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 07 September 2005

One way to mete out justice....good write!

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Joe Guillotin 08 June 2005

'A Dr. Seuss for our times' I kid...seriously, I enjoyed/but also felt the wrench of social commentary on this one. I do it too- so I empathize. I am reading a buncha your stuff based soley on comments I've seen of yours...so kudos on the comments! (I'll let you know how the poetry goes) . Hope you are well sir.

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Linda Preston 01 June 2005

This is an interesting comment on society. Well done.

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